chore: Be more precise when talking about network shield/relay#222
chore: Be more precise when talking about network shield/relay#222danielvallance wants to merge 1 commit into
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| The network shield feature provides the ability to transparently insert a “shield” between a microVM and the public Internet. | ||
| A relay redirects all network traffic to and from a network interface toward another network interface. | ||
| This lets you set up a dedicated relay VM and configure its interface as the relay for another VM's interface, so that all of the other VM's traffic transparently passes through the relay. |
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[Microsoft.SentenceLength] Try to keep sentences short (< 30 words).
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| The network shield feature provides the ability to transparently insert a “shield” between a microVM and the public Internet. | ||
| A relay redirects all network traffic to and from a network interface toward another network interface. | ||
| This lets you set up a dedicated relay VM and configure its interface as the relay for another VM's interface, so that all of the other VM's traffic transparently passes through the relay. |
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[Microsoft.Wordiness] Consider using 'all' instead of 'all of'.
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| The network shield feature provides the ability to transparently insert a “shield” between a microVM and the public Internet. | ||
| A relay redirects all network traffic to and from a network interface toward another network interface. | ||
| This lets you set up a dedicated relay VM and configure its interface as the relay for another VM's interface, so that all of the other VM's traffic transparently passes through the relay. |
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[write-good.TooWordy] 'all of' is too wordy.
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| A network shield is one example of a relay: it sits between a microVM and the public Internet, filters traffic, and can inject credentials or secrets for agentic and other use cases. |
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[Microsoft.SentenceLength] Try to keep sentences short (< 30 words).
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| A network shield is one example of a relay: it sits between a microVM and the public Internet, filters traffic, and can inject credentials or secrets for agentic and other use cases. | ||
| A first network shield image will be available soon, and the example above can then be updated to use it. |
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[write-good.Passive] 'be updated' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
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LGTM!
Reviewed-by: Dragos Gheorghioiu dragosg@unikraft.com
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